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About Me Member Emotional Poet bitten1016/Female/United States Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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Dazei guess im a little high but its not like im wasted  i mean i only smoked one joint i could barely taste it  all it did was make me wanna cough  it was too hot  in the garage  we left in his car  drivin high down the highway  but i guess its okay  because i dont really care either way  im not really walkin straight but its not like im slippin  i mean im used to passin out or sittin fuckin trippin  one time i smoked so much i puked in a bush and shit  no one saw i guess no one really gave a shit  called my dad to pick me up and told him i was sick  he didnt even fuckin notic Daze
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embracetoday the sun is overcast  feel the sweat upon your back  watch the wind between the trees.  feel my breath upon your face  its the way the vines entwine  its the way the trees embrace.  here the ever-changing sky  blowing wind between my lips  feel the river in your veins  feel the pain between your ribs  watch the shadows on your skin  rearview mirror, outside in.   
i see you with the eyes of my heart, which are blind,  
in my head you are a voice, in my heart you are a beat,  
youre a burning on my skin, youre a candle in my mind,  
youre a yearning in my bloo embrace
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skin on skinwith a word you burn my skin  you rape my soul. you tear my heart into a love  that’s laced with hate  that’s cursed with doubt  mistrust and fury  all i feel is violated  deep regret and penetrated  drying tears behind my eyes,  the smell of unsmoked cigarettes, you rape  my state of mind  
and i feel your heat beside me.  every time i see your face  i feel a burning from within  like a fire in the desert  like the touch of skin on skin.   
with a word you take  everything i had, and i  would have given it away. all i wanted  was your bre skin on skin
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Tue Feb 12, 2008, 7:41 PM
  • Mood: Adoration
  • Listening to: bryan adams, and other love songs
i was just looking back at my old poetry. god i was so emo. and i was realizing... how much my stuff has improved since then. and that makes me happy. it kind of gives me hope. i mean sometimes i feel like im writing for nothing, but its cool to see that theres actually a point, kind of. and like... im soooo much happier since then too. its like i can see how far ive come rather than just looking at it day by day... and ive come a long way... and i have a right to be proud of that.



*the number of poems i have on ap now

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~BenFreaky Aug 4, 2008, 5:48:21 AM
Thank u so much for your faves my friend *-* <3

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Mood: Attraction ~BenFreaky Mar 8, 2008, 1:58:34 AM
Heey you ;)

Thanks for your comment *.*

I love your poems =)
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~bohdanpomaly Feb 14, 2008, 7:06:29 AM
I am wandering a little in this new world. It's nice to meet you. Any advice is welcome.
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~Ritsuzen Feb 13, 2008, 4:23:46 AM
I love your poetry... it's so pretty... I mean, I don't know a lot about this stuff, but I loved every one of your poems. Good job!
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~sazripe Jan 6, 2008, 11:19:41 PM
thank you so much for the fav :heart:

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Mood: Artistic *destroyerdragon Dec 31, 2007, 6:16:18 PM
Hey thanks for the faves ^_^
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~Redpencil Dec 10, 2007, 2:54:58 AM
Hey you random deviant :rose:

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~jknai Nov 30, 2007, 2:17:42 PM
no offense but im glad im not the only one feeling that way...

mostly because i know im not alone in my depression, i guess...

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Love isn't about finding someone you can live with; it's about finding someone you can live without yet choose to live with anyway because he knows how to fix the toaster that you accidentally set on fire.
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